1.) The food that I will be describing is my mom's spaghetti .
2.) The special memories that I had with this food is all of the special occasion . When we celebrated our special occasions, for example holidays and birthdays, it was never complete without making spaghetti .
3.) The aroma of the tangy spaghetti sauce it's self already makes my mouth water . After the first bite of the somewhat luscious spaghetti leaves me wanting more .
4.) The person that I will be interviewing is my mom because she makes the best spaghetti .
It's great how you use specific words to describe your mom's spaghetti, like "tangy" and "luscious". You could use more words that includes the 5 senses to make the spaghetti even more savory. Also, when you answered question #2, the reading flow was kind of off because of the punctuation errors (Maybe change your blog's text font so that it's easier to read). Overall, with some changes, your story will be amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteIt's great that you described your mom's spaghetti in such a way that it's easy to get a visualization. You could write a little more for your readers to get a better idea about the spaghetti; maybe about the scent wafting through the air while it's cooking. Altogether it's excellent :)
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