Today was a good day to go to the beach because the weather was warm enough to make you want to go to the beach. I have always loved the weather of the beaches on the islands of Hawaii. The reason for this is because it is always beach weather all year round. My thoughts on todays weather however was very interesting because for a sunny day, there were not as much people in the beach as I expected.
I took this advantage grab my snorkeling mask and just dashed towards the water having no care of whats going to stop me. As I raced through the shore, I can feel my feet get burned from the sand. As I arrived at the water, I took a few seconds to breath in that sea breeze. The best thing about swimming is the first dive into the water just because you want to feel the cool refreshing feeling that you haven't felt in a while. Diving onto the water feels as if you have just washed away all of what has been on you mind that has been bugging you lately.
As I raised back up to the surface to put on my mask I can see that the rest of the people are enjoying themselves. I'm not surprised that I'm not the only one that like this place because for a beach, it has a lot to offer. looking through the mask underwater is like looking through another world. You can see colonies of fish swimming right pass you. It reminds me of a small fish neighborhood with a variety of colorful fishes
When I go to this place its as if I could just stay here for a very long time. I will never get used you the sunshine that covers the beach like a blanket and also how the view of the water and the horizon is always so outstanding. Just thinking of leaving makes me want to look forward to coming here again next time. I dont even think of school, chores, and work.
UNICORN WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH YOUR GAMMAR?! YOU FORGOT TO PUNCTUATE, CAPITALIZE YOUR "I"S" / FIRST WORDS OF THE SENTENCE, AND THE PERIODS, COMMAS, AND BREAKS!!!
ReplyDeleteBut some good things in your essay was that it was more detailed, you actually wrote what kind of mask you used in the beach! :D You also explained how you felt throughout the whole essay, literally the WHOLE easy. Haha but good job. You are definitely improving your writing skills!