If people were to recycle in Hawaii, it would benefit both them and the environment in many ways. For example, it creates less waste for the environment. Also, recycling benefits the people in Hawaii economically. recycling can also save Hawaii's residents energy.
Creating less waste for Hawaii's environment can benefit Hawaii in many ways. aluminum cans that have been recycled can go back on the store shelf's in around 60 days. This is a better then making new cans out of aluminum. also, recycling aluminum cans is much quicker then making new aluminum cans. aluminum cans have no limit to the amount of times it can be recycled. this makes it much easier to recycle then to make new ones. this also helps Hawaii's economy which is another reason to recycle.
Recycling has a big positive effects on the economy of Hawaii. consumers get their 5 cents when they return their containers to a redemption center. this is a good way for people to get some pocket money. it also is motivates more people into recycling. recycling offers jobs to people such as materials sorters, dispatchers, truck drivers, brokers, sales representatives, process engineers, chemist, and etc. if there isn't a lot of jobs for Hawaii to offer, then this would be a good way for people to get jobs. also if more people were to get these jobs it would make recycling faster.
People who recycle are saving themselves energy. recycling requires 95% less energy then not recycling. if you were to not recycle then alot of energy would go to waste. of everyone were to recycle then alot of energy would be saved. Recycling one aluminum can saves enough energy to keep 100-watt bulb burning for nearly four hours. if one can can were to power up a light bulb for 4 hours then millions would be able to power up alot of light bulbs. this can save people alot of money from there energy bill
Overall if people were to recycle in Hawaii, it would benefit both them and the environment in many ways. It creates less waste for the environment. Recycling benefits the people in Hawaii economically. Recycling can also save Hawaii's residents energy.
Florencio Your intro needs to be more intresting, you need to make your reader want to read it from the beginning.
ReplyDeleteI liked that your paragraphs transitioned smoothly and your main points get across easily. Your grammar could use some work though. Please capitalize and delete any unnecessary characters. Check your spelling too.
ReplyDeleteYou need to tell us something new. I think everyone in the US knows that recycling is good no matter where you live. However, why is it important for the people and land of Hawaii or Oahu. Your intro and conclusion are almost the same thing word-for-word please make the changes, look at your template of a five paragraph essay for more help. Also remember that your body paragraphs needs evidence(research), there is much research missing. AS(2-)
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