I am a personal unwritten book.
I will open myself
but, only to the people I trust.
people will judge me by my cover
but my cover is not what makes me stand out
it's my pages that matter.
I am open to ideas to write in my book.
The words of others is not what molds up my story.
Only the words that i write matter to me.
Nobody shall predict my future
because the rest is still unwritten
and there is still a lot more to write
Some lines don't make sense, No capital "I's" and introducing your future at the end is irrelevant, and such as "i am open to ideas to write in my book, the words of others is not what molds up my story" it is like, your taking in idea's, but your not intending to use it. and try to introduce you book as a story on your life.
ReplyDeleteNeed to work on vocabulary and grammar. "I am open to ideas to write in my book.
ReplyDeleteThe words of others is not what molds up my story." It doesn't make any sense. But I kind of liked the beginning and I liked the ending.